From ‘Black Silk’ to ‘His Robot Girlfriend’: The five top freebie originals at Feedbooks
December 7, 2009 | 3:09 pm
By David Rothman
Ahead are the five most popular freebie originals at Feedbooks, right now—followed by some commentary. The “most popular” is from last week, not all-time totals.
Black Silk, by Jan Gordon: “Victoria Hudson is 29 and lives in the kind of small town where everyone knows everyone else. She has two great loves in her life — her cat, Mister, and reading books from her used bookstore. She doesn’t see her life changing much in the future. She’s stuck. Until one night when she’s saved from probable danger by a mysterious stranger… A light romance with a paranormal twist.”
How to Disappear Completely, by David Bowick: “Sitting at the top of a Ferris wheel overlooking the Boston skyline, Josh’s life takes an unexpected turn, and things will never be the same. Along with the many surprises on his life’s new path, he’ll come to take life advice from a family of ducks, get in a bloody war with a dog, lose his job over a spilled drink, wake up in the hospital, apply to work at an adult-themed novelty bakery, and find out that people often aren’t what they seem…”
His Robot Girlfriend, by Wesley Allison: “Mike Smith’s life was crap, living all alone, years after his wife had died and his children had grown up and moved away. Then he saw the commercial for the Daffodil. Far more than other robots, the Daffodil could become anything and everything he wanted it to be. Mike’s life is about to change.” In certain respects this is about a guy with one Stepford Wife, except the tone of the book is sweet—at least from a man’s perspective—rather than spooky. No human was harmed to make the wife.
Turn the Porn On, by Xavier Leret: “An old man lies dying in a hospital bed. All he wants is for the nurse to turn some porn on. He wants to feel alive just once more before he dies.”
Uncovered Passion, by Christopher Golliday & Melissa Golliday: “Sasha Verochka is an FSB agent assigned to her first mission. Her mission? Uncovering the motives for why a handsome, former Marine is in Moscow. Being telepathic, she never thought it would be so hard to reveal the truth about Garrick Caldwell. But then again, she’d never experienced desire like this.”
Any patterns here? You bet. Bizarre occurrences and sex, with sci-fi and the paranormal, seem to be the star attractions here—in other words, the stuff of lots and lots of commercial books. I’ll be curious to know if any of these titles get signed up by large publishers. I don’t have the download figures handy—perhaps Hadrien at Feedbooks can fill point us to the stats—but I suspect they’re all or mostly over 10,000.
The issue is whether free downloads will translate into sales. To what extent will the “free” audience overlap with the paying one?
Perhaps Black Silk is at Amazon, but I didn’t spot it. How to Disappear Completely comes in at 58,015 in the Kindle Store; I don’t see it elsewhere at Amazon. His Robot Girlfriend in p-book format has a rank of 4,804,364 and no Kindle edition. I didn’t see Turn the Porn on at Amazon. Did I miss it? Uncovered Passion is 45,379 in the Kindle Store. Would that I have time to check out other stores! Anyone want to fill in the gap?
But who cares about the numbers? Have you read any of these titles? If so, what do you think of them as entertainment and—if applicable—literature?
Update, 7:30: Plugged in the information about the time period of the downloads.



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This is the top five based on last week’s downloads, not overall downloads. Four out of five of these books have over 10k downloads and the second one is closer from 20k.
I’ve read “Black Silk”, “How to Disappear Completely”, and “His Robot Girlfriend.” All three were entertaining, though perhaps a little short (approx. 100 pages each).
I found that I enjoyed the style of Black Silk, and was more interested in it than I originally anticipated, considering the genre and that it’s (in some way mentioned in the introduction) a fan-fic.
How to Disappear Completely struck me as a kind of feel-good teen or young adult romantic comedy. That might very well be the intention. Anyway, it was a decent, light read.
I found I was particularly interested in His Robot Girlfriend, because I love robots (thanks to Asimov). I didn’t expect Asimov from this book, but while I enjoyed the story, I found there were many places that could be further developed, particularly in certain facets of main characters. My main complaint with the book is that most of the time the main character and his robot girlfriend only shop and have sex. The constant shopping, particularly, annoyed me. That said, the author has said he wrote it with an adult barbie doll feeling in mind.
(sorry if this becomes a double post)
Quite revealing just the same, Hadrien, thanks! I’ll stick “last week” high up, David
Ben: Helpful reviews, thanks. I myself felt that HRG’s characters could have been better, er, rounded; and the ending was rather predictable. But the story did keep me reading on. David
@Ben. Thank you for your kind words about Black Silk. However, I would like to set the record straight. In the preface to Black Silk I mentioned that I usually write fanfiction, Black Silk is NOT a fanfic, it is a completely original work. Fanfiction is based on characters orginated by someone else.
@David. Black Silk has had over 15,000 downloads at Feedbooks, and over 1600 downloads at Smashwords, it’s also available at Barnes & Noble as a free download. I never intended to ask for money for it, so I’m just happy that people are downloading, reading and hopefully enjoying my work.
Did I mention how much I love both Feedbooks and Smashwords? They are wonderful platforms for authors to showcase their work.
Jan Gordon
Turn The Porn On is only 7 pages long in the PDF version, so doesn’t look like a candidate for a large publishing house.
I thought Black Silk was okay for a first novel, but it really felt like a first novel to me. It seemed a little rushed in places. I am not a fan of the type of romance where the hunky guy shows up on page 2 and immediately falls madly in love with a girl he’s never seen before. I feel like there needs to be a *little* more build-up than that
Most romances by best-sellers (Nora Roberts, for example) have some prior connection between the two leads (he hates her, or they are former flames) and the new relationship builds from there. Or else he meets her, she is intrigued and he rebuffs her. To me, he just shows up and instantly falls in love doesn’t work for me.
I liked How to Disappear Completely a lot. Haven’t read the other ones yet.